severity_softly: (cm - rossi/prentiss calm)
Helium Raven ([personal profile] severity_softly) wrote2009-01-17 11:48 pm

The Ever-Evolving Face of Sex, Rossi/Prentiss, R

Title: The Ever-Evolving Face of Sex
Author: [livejournal.com profile] severity_softly
Pairing: Rossi/Prentiss
Rating: R
Words: ~370
Summary: Emily suggests wax play.
Notes: Written for my wifey, [livejournal.com profile] innerslytherin, for providing me naughty Paget pictures. She requested Prentiss/Rossi and hot wax.


"That sounds... unpleasant," Dave said. His voice was cautious, though, as though he was hesitant to shoot down Emily's suggestion, and still hoarse from the orgasm that had just swept through his body and left him calling out her name a few minutes ago.

She was curled at his side, soft curves pressed against his solid body, stroking her fingertips over his chest and stomach. "Doesn't have to be," she breathed.

"You've obviously never burned yourself with candle wax before. Emily Prentiss, you've lead a charmed life."

She snorted and bit his jaw, liking the scratch of goatee against her lips, then climbed on top of him and kissed him. "Shut up," she murmured. "They make candles that burn at lower temperatures for things like that, you know."

He stared blankly at her for a moment. "And then I'm what? Covered in wax? How is that sexy?"

She returned the flat look he'd just given her.

"And I move, and it cracks apart and falls all over the place?"

He still looked utterly perplexed by the idea that hot wax could be erotic. She groaned and pressed her face to his neck, and he circled his arms around her waist.

"No, really, I want to understand this," he said, his voice taking on a slightly amused tone. "I can't even think of a reason, off hand, why someone would have this particular paraphilia, and I'm supposed to be an expert in this field."

She snorted again to cover a laugh and flicked her finger at his side, which caused him to jump and chuckle softly. It crumbled her resolve, and then she laughed too.

"Whatever happened to whipped cream? Sex was so much simpler in my day," he said, and when she pulled back to look at him, he was wearing a lopsided grin.

She matched it with a more devious grin of her own, then rolled her hips down gently against him, drawing a groan that said he wasn't quite ready to go again, even as he slid his hand up to cup her breast, his thumb brushing over her nipple.

"I have news for you," she told him. "'Your day' is nowhere near over yet."
innerslytherin: (3cm - emily and dave)

[personal profile] innerslytherin 2009-01-18 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
LMAO! You are so freaking awesome! I absolutely love the way they debate this, and Dave bringing in his 'expertise' makes me giggle.

MAN I love this pairing. *clings* And I LOVE your writing. :D

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Well, you know I had my issues with the kink. And after I started to write it, I realized Dave had a few of his own. ;)

Thank you, dear! <###33333
innerslytherin: (Default)

[personal profile] innerslytherin 2009-01-18 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
And I can TOTALLY see Dave having issues with any paraphilia that causes pain. I mean, you know my objections to hardcore BDSM in this fandom. So it makes sense Dave would have his doubts. *G*

[identity profile] mcgarrygirl78.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
I love this. There should be more Prentiss/Rossi out there, its good stuff. Your Dave is just so.....Dave. I adore him.
innerslytherin: (Default)

[personal profile] innerslytherin 2009-01-18 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
We have some. We just need to beta it. *G* I won my wifey over to the Dark side. Not only HET, but Prentiss/Dave. Mwahaha.

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Because you are evil, and they are hot. :P
innerslytherin: (3cm - emily!)

[personal profile] innerslytherin 2009-01-18 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Both very valid reasons, but mostly the latter. ^_~

[identity profile] mcgarrygirl78.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
I wrote one once and would love to explore more. This inspires me.

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And there really should be more of this pairing! :D (And you've kicked the gel pen habit, I see? ^_~ ...*G* Sorry, some people's "names" are very memorable. :P)
Edited 2009-01-18 05:05 (UTC)

[identity profile] mcgarrygirl78.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
I'm way too superstituous to ever kick that habit, I'd be afraid of never being able to write another fic.

I definitely want to dip my foot in the Prentiss/Rossi wading pool again.

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
You hand write before you type fic out? I'm always amazed by people who can do that. I think I'd kill my hand (I death grip pens and cramp up even with short notes) and not be able to read what I wrote anyway!

You should! :)

[identity profile] mcgarrygirl78.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
Actually with Criminal Minds I am much more in front of the computer (though not always) but when I was writing West Wing, most of it was pad and pen first. When I write at work its always pad and pen, easier to sneak when I am supposed to be doing other stuff.
ext_3482: Saturn Girl (cm» busy busy prentiss)

[identity profile] unlovablehands.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
This is really exactly as hilarious as these two should be, and in all the right ways. :D

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] fordandfitzroy.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
This is pretty much exactly the sort of thing I want out of this pairing. Rossi being all confused and Prentiss laughing at him. :D :D

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
lol Thanks!

[identity profile] slash-girl.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 07:18 am (UTC)(link)
*hee* I like this. I liked Prentiss teasing him--and Rossi is just SO Rossi with his comments.

I see from the comments there will be more--I'll definitely check it out when it's posted. :D

And I really need to make some Rossi icons....

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I may have mentioned this before (I feel like I have), but it always makes me grin when you comment outside your otp. :)

Yep, we wrote a Rossi/Prentiss "coda" to The Instincts that hopefully won't be too terrible long in coming, though it is NC-17 (I don't know how you feel about explicit het).

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

[identity profile] patch-tank.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
That was cute. And see, now I have an image of Emily, and hot wax, and. . . yeah, you get the idea *grins*.

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 12:55 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL Thank you!

[identity profile] jalabert.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a new one on me, but it was fun. This seems to be my week for reading Rossi fic.

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-24 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for Rossi fic! ;) Thank you!
cordeliadelayne: (rossi)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2009-01-18 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! This is brill. I love Rossi trying to be all rational about it :D

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-24 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :D

[identity profile] elekanahmen.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
emily prentiss is so a little kinkbox

i love it

*snuggles and loves* wonderful.

now i get to curse you while i fap to the thought of rossi/prentiss

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-24 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't mind being cursed for that. ;)

Thanks! :)

[identity profile] dragonladyk.livejournal.com 2009-01-20 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. That was cute.

DragonLady

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-01-24 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] mingsmommy.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know how I missed this until now. WOW. HOT.

Wonderful, wonderful and terrific characterizations!

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2009-09-05 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] smacky30.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Um...wow. Very nice. Sexy and funny - not an easy combo. :D

[identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! This is the first Rossi/Prentiss fics I ever wrote! Glad you liked it!