I'm suddenly all talky on journals again!

[severity_softly]

When you rearrange words in sentences, it's always good to make sure you get all of them involved in the change. Otherwise, you end up with gems like this:

Remus' heart was hammered in his chest.

XD

Comments

[cacopheny.livejournal.com]

I'VE DONE THAT!!

... well, not that particular sentence, obviously, but when I edit sentences I keep FORGETTING to change tenses in my verbs XD It makes things interesting.

[arcanetrivia]

"was hammering"

"hammered"

Yyyeh, verb agreement is your friend! :)