about the least smutty word I could write...

[severity_softly]

Could I use the word "vagina" any more in this fic? Seriously, so not sexy. And yet, Severus refuses to allow slang the slightest foothold when it comes to female genitalia. Should I apologize in advance for the use of "vagina" in smut fic?

At least he's not calling it a "hoo-ha": When Remus finally pressed his lips against Severus' newly acquired hoo-ha, Severus trembled with desire. XD

Comments

[schemingreader.livejournal.com]

The whole thing together? is the genitals. I don't know. It's better, if you are trying to write smut, to be specific, I think. If a person changes gender, you get to write about how different it feels in a lot of parts. Euphemize! Inner thighs!

[severity-softly.livejournal.com]

Oh, I agree. They're just taking their sweet time even getting down to the detailed parts down there. :)