severity_softly: (cm - jj/emily)
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Title: Soaked
Author: [livejournal.com profile] severity_softly
Pairing: JJ/Emily
Rating: PG-13/FRT
Word count: ~350
Summary: JJ gets soaked.
A/N: My first bit of femslash in this fandom (and maybe only my third or so attempt at it in any fandom), so be gentle. Dedicated to the wonderful anon author of this fic, because IT'S HER FAULT. ;) Lots of thanks to [livejournal.com profile] innerslytherin for giving this a quick read through, if just to tell me I haven't, in fact, lost my fucking mind. <3


JJ was dripping.

The rain had soaked her hair, turning it an almost mousy color, and drenched every piece of clothing she was wearing straight down to her underwear. Her feet were dry, but it was only a matter of time before the rain wicked through her socks, too. And thank God she had worn her jacket out; the white blouse she had on under it was currently leaving nothing to the imagination. She knew that without even looking.

"Hey, JJ, did you know there was an eighty-seven percent chance of rain today?" Reid asked as she walked into the bullpen, a tiny smirk playing on his lips. Morgan and Garcia (who was perched on the edge of his desk) started laughing.

JJ darted a glance at Hotch's office door, then flipped Reid off before heading to her office, which only made the laughter louder. Even Rossi, who was standing in the kitchenette, looked amused when JJ passed him.

Once she got to her office, she flipped on the space heater under her desk and hunched into the warmth. It was barely working, but at least she'd stopped shaking by the time she saw Emily walk past her door... then stop in her tracks and turn around to poke her head inside.

"What happened to you?" Emily asked.

"Do you all have to look so amused?" JJ replied. Emily laughed and JJ's frown deepened. "I went out for coffee, and when I came back it was pouring."

"You're wearing that white top today, aren't you?" Emily was grinning as she stepped inside and shut the door behind her.

JJ snorted and rolled her eyes, and damn it, just like that she was smiling again, even if she was still fighting it. "We're working."

"Yeah, I know... but your shirt's never going to dry if you leave the jacket on all day."

JJ huffed a laugh and looked over at her office windows, confirming that the blinds were shut. "Come here," she said, and pulled Emily down for a kiss when she was close enough. "You're terrible," she whispered against Emily's lips when the kiss broke.

"You're gorgeous," Emily returned. "Even like this." Her lips covered JJ's again, taking JJ's breath away with another heated kiss, then Emily pulled back to meet her eyes. "Even if this isn't how I prefer you to get wet."

Date: 2008-12-21 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] femme-slash-fan.livejournal.com
Okay... wow. Very nice indeed.

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Date: 2008-12-21 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
OH I SEE HOW IT IS

blame the innocent one

BECAUSE IT'S SO EASY

still, i consider it the highest of compliments

and it nearly made me fall out of my bed to see that you wrote this. it's wonderful

xoxo

you-know-who

Date: 2008-12-21 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com
*cackles* SO EASY to blame the faceless anon person! *pokes at you*

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Date: 2008-12-21 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elekanahmen.livejournal.com
*squeal* I LOVE IT.

welcome to the dark side *evil laughter*

we have cookies!

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Date: 2008-12-21 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lena-fan.livejournal.com
Lol, that was great xxx

Date: 2008-12-21 07:19 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-21 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] calliopes-muse.livejournal.com
Oh, I loved that!!!!

Date: 2008-12-21 07:19 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-21 07:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, very sweet! :D

Date: 2008-12-21 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com
*g* Thanks! My shipping in this fandom clearly has very few bounds... ;)

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Date: 2008-12-21 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkbardzero.livejournal.com
Lol, just what I needed to read after a weekend spent battling my parents' internet! Sweet and sexy and very funny!

Date: 2008-12-21 09:44 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-21 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostnfoundcause.livejournal.com
Yes, I agree with everyone, it is a great story. :]

Date: 2008-12-21 11:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-21 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abilena.livejournal.com
That was GREAT. I loved it.

Date: 2008-12-21 11:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-21 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nvr-sk-to-tll.livejournal.com
This little story is pretty much cool beans with awesomesauce...hoping perhaps to see more from you...

Date: 2008-12-21 11:17 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-22 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberkb.livejournal.com
oh yes. I did enjoy. :D

Date: 2008-12-22 03:39 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-12-22 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] libmix.livejournal.com
Hee I really liked this. Just what I needed on a dull Monday morning :D

Date: 2008-12-22 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it! Thanks!

Date: 2008-12-22 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhea-carlysse.livejournal.com
*___*

so pretty <3 see? Writing JJ/Prentiss is not scary, keep doing it. With smut, please? xD


JJ huffed a laugh and looked over at her office windows, confirming that the blinds were shut. "Come here," she said, and pulled Emily down for a kiss when she was close enough. "You're terrible," she whispered against Emily's lips when the kiss broke.

"You're gorgeous," Emily returned. "Even like this." Her lips covered JJ's again, taking JJ's breath away with another heated kiss, then Emily pulled back to meet her eyes. "Even if this isn't how I prefer you to get wet."


♥♥ I love that bit

Date: 2008-12-22 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com
Oh, if you're waiting for me to write femslash smut, you'll probably be waiting a long damn time. LOL

Thanks, dear. :)

Date: 2008-12-23 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trexkitten.livejournal.com
HeHeHe! Loved it! Especially the last line. You did a great job, and I hope you continue to write JJ/Emily. I'll have to read some of your CM Slash Fics when I have free time! I'm a free for all Shipper. I read Femslash, Slash & Het, I think if they work, they work! For CM I ship JJ/Emily, Morgan/Garcia, Hotch/Rossi(Can u say Gay Cowboy!), Reid/whoever he's pretty cute he can a carry a whole pairing himself.

Date: 2008-12-23 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severity-softly.livejournal.com
*G* Hotch/Rossi is so my comfort pairing! Love them. And I pretty much write/co-write Reid/everyone, except Reid/Gideon. :) I'm tempted to write more femslash, but who knows, considering my track record. ;)

Thanks!

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Date: 2008-12-26 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lysachan.livejournal.com
Hee, very nice. Sweet and sexy and well-written. Just what I needed this morning!

Date: 2008-12-26 12:18 pm (UTC)

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